Chapter 1 Title Page

September 19th, 2011, 3:32 pm

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Reply JammyScribbler, September 19th, 2011, 3:32 pm

Finally! I'm terribly sorry for the lack of updates, but my graphics tablet has been completely dead for the last two weeks ^^;

But now it's fixed, and to celebrate, here's the title page for the next chapter in glorious colour! The little girl is so much fun to draw, which is lucky as she features a lot in this section ^^

Enjoy! And don't forget you can find loads of bonus material relating to the comic over at http://www.jammyscribbler.deviantart.com

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Reply gargantuanmedia@gmail.com, September 21st, 2011, 8:33 am

This title shows promise. Your close-ups (CU) show a growing amount of excellence in form, style and composition.

BUT watch your exteriors. Page One shows some of the doors and windows as odd shapes and they look very similar and a lot like The Simpsons home to me!

Maybe looking at classic German architecture would help you? ( http://classicgermanculture.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/01/germany1.jpg )

Reply JammyScribbler, September 21st, 2011, 8:39 am

@gargantuanmedia@gmail.com: Thank you so much. It means a lot for someone to say that.

I am aware of the questionable architecture as it's something I'm not used to drawing,and the first few pages were created in a bit of a rush. They will be re-visited and fixed at a later date.

Thanks for the feedback!

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