Chapter 3 Page 11

March 11th, 2013, 4:25 pm

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Reply JammyScribbler, March 11th, 2013, 4:25 pm

I believe the correct terminology is 'the shit is about to go down'. Prepare your feels, my friends.

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Reply I have mace, March 11th, 2013, 4:33 pm

The tension- so well done!

Reply JammyScribbler, March 11th, 2013, 4:36 pm

@I have mace: Thanks very much, I'm glad I managed to get it right! I was really worried about this scene, I wanted to get the atmosphere just right.

Reply CowgirlEm, March 12th, 2013, 8:03 am

I agree the tension is spot on!
I love that Lily is pulling at her hair - desperate to assure herself of what she's saying!
I have tissues at the ready!

Reply JammyScribbler, March 12th, 2013, 8:15 am

@CowgirlEm: Thank you! Yeah, Lily's 'nervous tick' if you will is to pull and play with her hair when she's stressed or worried.

Excellent, you might need them!

Reply 3o-s-knight, March 16th, 2013, 11:27 am

Awe, even lilly's optimism is waining!! ;n; yeah agreed with everyone, the tension was awesome! I can't waitnfor the next update to see what Iggy's has to say about this :'Y

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